All Comments on 'Any Opportunity Will Do Ch. 01'

Just read the first chapter of this story. Having just finished your story "Laura" I am looking forward to this one, but I find I am deeply disturbed by the start. I am familiar with abuse of women, first hand, as I almost killed my X son in law as an abusive husband.

I know you are bringing the plight of abused women to your stories and I really appreciate the focus and hope you really have a strong hero for this story, one who can take names and kick hinie in a big way.

Dint know quite yet how to score this first chapter as i like the fast start but am disturbed by the subject matter.

What the duce, give it a big one.