All Comments on 'Mom Moves In'

I enjoyed reading this story, it is a very good beginning to what should be a great story.

That was a hot intro. You have got to write many more chapters, so many ideas come to mind. It sounds like Mom's a switch. WAY HOT

Nice start. Lots of potential for mom to do some serious cock teasing of both her son and the guys on the street in some sexy outfits and heels. Looking forward to more chapters. Perhaps even another switch where she lets her son tie her to the bed...........

The story was prepped with enough back ground that makes the story line believable. I myself would have liked the story to be a little longer and carry on to some mom and son fucking. I hope that the son is a muff diver and we get to read of his sucking and licking his mother's cunt. very good for the first post, well writen and the story moved smoothly. I hope the author writes some nasty, cum covered, and cunt oil dripping from everywhere chapters into this series. Being that mom doesn't work gives her plenty of time to prepare the set-up for some super sexual episodes, and become submissive to her new lover and master, and the son is up to the task of controlling his mother. She has served herself to him on a silver platter, he only needs to take charge of this sexual woman. Thanks ......Rich

Eh...too fast and too short to really get anyone's comlete attention.

"I had been working out so my muscles were in pretty good shape. I was about 5 foot 8 inches tall and weighed 160 pounds."<BR><BR>I was 5'7" and weighed 132 lbs. in 5th Grade! What are you, a munchkin????

Good start but it needs to continue and develop. More please.

Oh yeah BTW, 5 foot 8 and 160 pounds makes him a middleweight boxer. he's fit.

If we must be Eighteen to read this stuff...

Should not the authors be at least that old????

A huge divorce settlement, toned body, etc. and she moves in with the son? Riiiiiiiiiight!

Oh, and you might invest in Spell Check; your age is showing!

You have done one like this before or was that someone else. Do a different storyline or something!!!!! Good luck.

Could you add about one more page, tell us how he ties her to the bed,and fucks her brains out. Then unties her, so she can get up and cook dinner...

Not a bad read...THANKS

HAD to be a WIMP. ONLY wimps need to feel in extreme control.

Good start; however, I like character development (mental and/or emotional) as well as plot.

Seemed to me Mom traded down not up...