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Housebound Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by NicoliEstovich07/28/09

Interesting start.

Interesting start. Nice writing, I feel compelled to say, and a good, creepy vibe. I'm curious to see where this will take us; and how far you'll take it...

- Nicoli.

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by FallingToFly08/01/09

Finally got here

And I really like this set up. I'm a huge fan of tease/nonconsent/BDSM related stuff, and this was a nice, wicked start.

I'm heading on to the next chapter, because I really can't wait to see what's going to happen.

A couple of notes- I caught some minor punctuation errors, but nothing major, and the one thing I really wished for was MORE description. I'd really like to know more than she was wet and frustrated- scent, sound, taste, touch and sight- the five golden rules of a description scene.

On to the next chapter!!!

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by Anonymous08/04/09

definately an interresting start.

I was, however pulled out of the story a little, not expecting a bound and tied woman to acquiesce so quickly... But then, i suppose, what else is she supposed to do, feel, think...

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I'm very curious

Must read more. My only suggestion would be to make it a little longer next time. I got the same suggestion and when I started doing so I got better ratings. Very good writing and so far very interested to see where this goes.

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by Anonymous08/11/16

Very well written! I am looking forward to reading more.

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