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So Happy!
I was very happy to see the next chapter up (wish it was longer). Of course Sorren was not dead but really enjoyed the discovery of this. "kiss me again before I disappear" had me rolling. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Yay!
I agree, much too short, but at least now I know Sorran is alive! Looking forward to the next chapter!
are you going to finish it?
please finish it! i want to know how it ends. please?
More!
You have to write more! i love this story i don't want it to end! please write more and write it quick! your such a good writer and could even get this published if you felt the need! MORE MORE MORE....please :D
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I really like this story! I'm gald they finaly got togheteher, but do you plan to leave the story here? There is much left unresolved. Please continue!
Very interesting story!
I really like it! I hope you're able to finish out some day!
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