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Again the honour is mine....
To be the first to comment. Many Feathers, no matter what you write you will get many for both sides of that argument, be assured I will read anything you write.
for women/moms like myself...and
for women/moms like myself..and real bi couples...and there are a great number... who read posts on this site..don't use chapter #8 as a "token" one for including dad/son bi..and then drop it..but continue it... with hot total family bi...including bi dad/son action...as you progress in telling your tale..nothing is hotter to women/moms like myself than experiencing/reading about that type of scenerio...and to use it as a token...rather than reality..is almost insulting..99.9% posts on this site think only bi lez action is needed...nothing could be further from reality...so please...don't follow that path...
Love your writing.
I love your writing Many Feathers....and I'm very much looking forward to Chapter 8. I'm somewhat bi-curious, so the bi-sexuality you intend for other stories is something I enjooy as much as the hetero stories. thanks.
Love your writing.
I love your writing Many Feathers....and I'm very much looking forward to Chapter 8. I'm somewhat bi-curious, so the bi-sexuality you intend for other stories is something I enjooy as much as the hetero stories. thanks.
Great story, love the concept of being snowed in
The fact that the family is in reality, isolated from the rest of the world, makes the story very believable, along with being well writen. I hope that you would write something of how the adventure carried on after leaving the snowed in situation, especially between Mandy and her brother. Thanks .......Rich
looking fwd to ch 8
I think that realistically it is a logical happening in the progress of the story. Keep up the good work.
Another Great Chapter!!!!
Manny you have written another great Chapter in the series. I like the way you have developed the series from the start until now. I think it's a natural progression for one of the girls to think about Dad and Brian to have fun together. I can hardly wait to read Chapter eight and don't think it's just another token Chapter for you. I love the way you write the stories keep up the good work.
Another job well done
Bring on chapter 8! I am very much looking forward to to some bi father son action. Especially directed by Colette. Of all the incest stories on Lit this and The Kids at Play by Rebecca are my most favorite. You are a great writer.
---Rich
You have do it again
The art of photography and the act of posing for the camera. Erotica at its best. Thanks for another great chapter.
brilliant writing
some of the best dialogue I have read on this site
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