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Garden of Eden

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by Anonymous07/27/09

Worst story EVER written

Nuff said

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by madengineer307/27/09

Very Nice.

It isn't often that one runs into a story that is written in a partially classical style. The word pictures that are used remind me of some of the flowery verbage found in works much like the Rubyat, or the early translations of the Odyssey. This is a neat story.

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by Eric_Shift07/27/09

I liked it

Very first discovery, first love, first time story. Very loving. Thanks

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