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by Anonymous

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by srgeek07/27/09

This is OK

This was OK, but very predictable.

I hope the posting of this is not a signal that you are abandoning "The Uprising". That story is so much more than "OK".

-- srgeek --

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by Anonymous07/27/09

help

Not very well written... too many problems to detail but just having a good editor would help some.

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by bb_peaks07/28/09

Yummy

Had a few errors but not so much that made me stop reading. Enjoyed the story as the ending is one of my fave fantasies.

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by joe_of_diamonds07/31/09

hmm, not bad

good transitions with the pov, which isn't easy to do. a good, fast-paced sex treat.

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by Scorpio4408/03/09

Promising!

Please, keep writing.

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by Anonymous01/18/14

have sex with me please

i havent had sex for a whole day will you have sex with me call me @ 405-671-5947!!! just to let you know i hate condoms and i am female also my vagina needs your penis=0 and now for one more thing if you want to sleep with me then and there meet me at starbucks any thursday evening @ 5:30!!! hope to have sex with you soon!!!

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