All Comments on 'Use your mouth'

I like this poem a lot. I like the metaphor; the apple thing is cunning and unexpected. A very cool poem and nice and precise.

What a difference the time of day makes and who's saying it with a juicier meaning

This poem is 'sweet flesh

to be eaten', very nice.

bite into me.....

I like the way you've the metaphor, a lot.

Five.

Nicely done.

Is mind- blowing. Simple but exactly right.