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Please, let's have chapter 2.
I prefer good characters and some romance -just like you have done.
Well devloped plot & great sex
Now I will have to read the rest of your stories ! ! !
Great Story
Start working on chapter 2!
Yes, chapters two and three, if needed
I wanna read more of Miss Nova and Evan.
Excellent.
Detail, character development, pacing -- it's all there, with bells on. Very nice, very nice indeed.
Please god more!!!!
More chapters please, I loved it, more more more !!!!
Wow!!
That was the hottest story I've read on Lit in a long time!!
When are those other chapters coming?! I can't wait to read more!
Great stuff!
Wow
This is one the best stories that I have ever read on this site. Excellent job, I can't wait for Chapter 2.
5/5
Slow burn...soooo hot!
This is one of my fave ever stories on Lit......I've read it a few times and love it!
Long and Slow
Short red dresses and white cowboy hats to begin with. How could anything go wrong from there?
..Wonderfully Hot...
Wonderfully Hot, and very well written.
..Wonderfully Hot...
Wonderfully Hot, and very well written.
..Wonderfully Hot...
Wonderfully Hot, and very well written.
..Wonderfully Hot...
Wonderfully Hot, and very well written.
..Wonderfully Hot...
Wonderfully Hot, and very well written.
..Wonderfully Hot...
Wonderfully Hot, and very well written.
Amazing
Great Story. Waiting for Chapter 2?? Though I guess it's been long enough that you might not even be writing here anymore, which is a shame. But, hopefully you get this comment anyway.
your...
AMAZING
Chapter two!!!
Please post another chapter, I want to know what happens!!!
The beginnings
It has the begining of a good story, Why don't you continue it?
More?
This is a story that begs for much more! There should be at least 3 more chapters!
Great tale and great writimg!
Next
Well written but too short, what happens next?
Damn, Girl!
I just happened to read your story. I'll read more. We girls have to stick together. You got me wet and horny, and that's a LOT for your first story. I liked it!
Dammmmnnn !!!
Damn girl you better call that number. I'd give you five stars but a four (4) on the Budweiser Scale is worth a whole lot more !!!
Applause!
Very satisfying indeed! Thanks!
2 wee quibbles common on Literotica..
1 "Grinded " isn't a proper word.
2 "Smirk" has a negative and condescending connotation you don't intend.
Yes!
YES, Miss Nova deserved a second chapter. But this was written in 2002, I don't think another chapter is coming, which is unfortunate. I wish nothing but the best to a very talented writer, Route66girl. Thanks for all your stories girl, I hope for found fame and fortune with your words!
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