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super!
I want more!!!
Love it!!!
I loved Jason and Laysea's story. It was so sad that Trista was killed and my heart hurt for Jared but I am glad that you are writing a story for him and giving him not only a woman that will make him happy but he will also get a daughter out of the deal!!! I look forward to the next chapter. Thank!!!!
Chloe's great
This is a cute story, and I really like Chloe. I suggest you work on the dialogue a bit. It's kind of clunky. Try more contractions, like "I'm" and "you're." People just don't talk as formally as you have them here (usually). But you nailed the little kid attitude!
Love it!!!
I loved The Chess Piece and I think I'm going to love Second Chance even more. I absolutely love Chloe, she is so hilarious. I can't wait for more chapters.
loved it
awww i'm loving this story and chole she's funny and a doll.
ROTFLMAO!
*giggles*
Chloe: Jared?
Jared: Yes?
Chloe: Will you give mommy a baby?
Oh, I LOVE kids! =D
soooo funny. n chloe is something else. so cute. can you give mommy a baby, well see. no way. i bet that tom guy is someone from her past. it could be or hes just creepy.
I just found your stories
I love them you should write more novel/stories your characters are great and have so much depth
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