Loved the "mommy" parts of the story. It defines the roles a little more and keeps the son in his place, below the mother. Maybe a little more struggle with emotions before this threshold is crossed. Still gave you a 100 and hope that there will be more between these two.
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Anonymous07/30/09
tell us more-get dad into 3some action
good beginning-but get dad into action with mom and hugh together-and since mom is such a hottie-bet she would like to next see hugh and dad in some bi fun with her directing the action abd her being rewarded with all that hot terrific cum..as a totally unihibited woman/mom i know i do.nothing hotter.to read about and experience.
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Anonymous07/30/09
More!
Mom's is kind of a little slut isn't she? At just 38 she's still able to be bred isn't she? Maybe daddy finds out that his son is far superior to him in all important departments. Moms are really great fucks.
Normally I don't cotton to multiple perspective stories, but you worked it perfectly, balancing the flow of the story between mother and son. Well done!
Keep going, develop the relationship more, but keep the father out of it. Keep them loving, no humiliation or pain, just excitement and exploration.
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Anonymous12/20/09
Time period of the story?
Is the story supposed to be set in the the early 2oth century or something ,becuase there was kinda a wild west rustic feel to it in the beggining. Especially when he came in from the horses and how dad would be gone for a few days, which I assumed would be on a cattle drive or something.
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Anonymous12/20/09
preggo mom-son
it was really good....i think it made readers shoot der cum....y dont u make her pregnant n give birth to der incestous child n let both of dem suck her boobs, while he fonger fuck her...
i wish it was entangled with romance and teasing but this pure incest sex erotic story is alright
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Anonymous01/28/12
"Moms are really great fucks!"
That's what a previous commenter said, and truer words were never spoken. This is an excellent story by a gifted writer. It shows why more and more boys are just going ahead with their deepest urge---to shove their big stiff prick up the cunt they desire above all others---their own mother's! As for mothers, they're thrilled beyond words when he see their big strapping boy hard in his pants around them. Mothers have a very special love and affection for their boy's stiff young dick and his hot young balls. Their son's manly virility overwhelms their mind and makes their motherly cunt real wet.
English
Good start...
Loved the "mommy" parts of the story. It defines the roles a little more and keeps the son in his place, below the mother. Maybe a little more struggle with emotions before this threshold is crossed. Still gave you a 100 and hope that there will be more between these two.
tell us more-get dad into 3some action
good beginning-but get dad into action with mom and hugh together-and since mom is such a hottie-bet she would like to next see hugh and dad in some bi fun with her directing the action abd her being rewarded with all that hot terrific cum..as a totally unihibited woman/mom i know i do.nothing hotter.to read about and experience.
More!
Mom's is kind of a little slut isn't she? At just 38 she's still able to be bred isn't she? Maybe daddy finds out that his son is far superior to him in all important departments. Moms are really great fucks.
Nice and Naughty
Normally I don't cotton to multiple perspective stories, but you worked it perfectly, balancing the flow of the story between mother and son. Well done!
Mom in charge
Keep going, develop the relationship more, but keep the father out of it. Keep them loving, no humiliation or pain, just excitement and exploration.
Time period of the story?
Is the story supposed to be set in the the early 2oth century or something ,becuase there was kinda a wild west rustic feel to it in the beggining. Especially when he came in from the horses and how dad would be gone for a few days, which I assumed would be on a cattle drive or something.
preggo mom-son
it was really good....i think it made readers shoot der cum....y dont u make her pregnant n give birth to der incestous child n let both of dem suck her boobs, while he fonger fuck her...
quite good
i wish it was entangled with romance and teasing but this pure incest sex erotic story is alright
"Moms are really great fucks!"
That's what a previous commenter said, and truer words were never spoken. This is an excellent story by a gifted writer. It shows why more and more boys are just going ahead with their deepest urge---to shove their big stiff prick up the cunt they desire above all others---their own mother's! As for mothers, they're thrilled beyond words when he see their big strapping boy hard in his pants around them. Mothers have a very special love and affection for their boy's stiff young dick and his hot young balls. Their son's manly virility overwhelms their mind and makes their motherly cunt real wet.
Whoa man am I high or what?
1 time my mommy suk my dik n it fel gude lolz
Great Story
I loved the story. I so reminded me of my son and I when he was 17.
Very erotic!
I was immediately at attention
Banned?
Wow. "This profile is banned." I wonder what he/she did.
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