Be Careful What You Confess Ch. 01

new twist

It is nice to see a new angle on the genre

She's a freaky fucking bitch

He doesn't need a divorce, he needs a straight jacket for the crazy bitch he's married to. Although he could get a divorce on the grounds of cruel and unusual punishment for not getting blow jobs from his wife. That's grounds for ejection in any marriage if she doesn't suck his cock or mow the yard.Thanks ........Rich

Since she's a budding writer

she could just be trying out a storyline on the confession site to see how it plays and what readers' reactions are. Not sure why she would have bought the poison though. -Jeff

What a cool set-up

The author does not give us any hint about where this is going! The hero may die of stress before he finds out anything. Good work.

Great start

When's the next chapter?

Sooner is better than later.

very interesting. I love it.

Maybe it's mistaken identity, maybe she's writing a book...who knows, I'm in for the ride though. As a side note, she had good reason to be paranoid, her husband doesn't trust her any more than she trusts him, as evident by the spyware on her 'puter.

Love it so far

Great start

Well-written story, interesting variation . . .

This is quite good so far. Of course, curare derivatives (like pancuronium bromide) need to be injected -- they are harmless when taken by mouth -- but I'll give this little blooper a pass in the interest of seeing how our "loving wife" turns out. Our hero only became curious after quite a few years of aberrant behavior by his wife; I'm surprised he never suggested counseling or psychiatric care. Of course, he would have been permanently "cut off," but it sounds as if that is pretty much the case in any event.

I rated this chapter 5*****

It is a fun read. I don't believe she is planning to poison him and that it is just a fantasy that she enjoys writing and receiving responses to. Nevertheless, I don't blame him for taking precautions.

If DWannabe rates it five

I rate it zero.

this was a whole lot of blah blah blah and of course dwornoutcock would rate this shit 5 when he rates really great stories 0

I Think More Needs to be Read to Effectively Rate this Story

Could be good, but hard to decipher if it's a comedy or a dark melodrama

Interesting

Such a curious start. Jeez, I'm not going to drink any coffee until I read ch.2.

HA

Loving it

A very intriguing story.

nice story

as a story. a bit overdone, in the beginning. her only craziness is her thoughts about security, and I cant argue about that, but there are degrees. why does he think she is writing about him, when everything she writes isn't him, or what he does?

Loving it!

The wife is way over the top, but I believe that was the author's intent. Interesting to see how this turns out. TAGS: I don't understand how "hot wife" or "confession" got on the list. Maybe next chapter? Is this website the one she uses for "research" for her impending novel?