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Interstate Mirage

byBrenCain©
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by Anonymous

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by Eric_Shift08/01/09

Old story worked in a new way

I Love old Legends

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by skywriterxxx08/01/09

Amazing story...

Well done, very well done! Great story, good ending, easy to read and 'identify with'...
I have to assume the spelling errors were intentional! They did fit right in with the plot...
Good read, gave me goosebumps at the end.

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by manyeyedhydra08/01/09

A nice little ghost tale

A nice and hot little ghost tale. Well done. Keep an eye on those typos though ;)

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by ZeeAZi12/28/09

More please

You should write/submit more!

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