by aurelius1982
What a sequel! Balram in the driver's seat where he belongs.
Really looking forward to learn what this old guy has got and how he will use it to pleasure Shilpa.
You are very good!
This one was really good. I believe this Balram will be my all-time Literotica hero! But please let her other suitors be minor characters...
This story is still so open. The question "Will Arun take her back?" lingers. But more important, I think: "Will Shilpa be able go back to Arun after she has savoured what Balram has to offer?".
Splendid! Enchanting! Gripping! Well thought out plot. This actually has a story. Great work! Can't wait to read more.
You yummy old stud bastard!
Show this young guy whu rules the roost.
Punk him good! We love you!
What's better than a good story of an ugly, old man who thanks to self-confidence and a huge, strong cock is able to conquer a young, lovely woman?
Nothing!
Men like Balram are extremely rare but they exist. Sorry, Arun, you don't stand a chance against this force of nature.