All Comments on 'Just the Beginning'

Don't write stories about me (you) write them from your POV, make a character other than me the other person.

i really enjoyed your story. and i look forward to reading more from you! thanks

Love the story, I look forward to more !

Beautiful story from a beautiful girl.

Great start, I love kiss n tell stories like these. I hope you have more stories about your anal experiences.

Good work, Faith. Keep it up (your ass! LOL!)

. .Such A Stories are either Jingo or brutal, and male. I avoid them; with enough experience to know not all women are so tuned. This Tho was CLASS and one of the Best life reads. Total well done. .and enjoy.

A great first story about anal how it should be practiced and how it should be enjoyed. Looking forward to reading some more.

Great story of your first time. My husband is gentle with me too, never forcing it. Now I thoroughly enjoy him fucking my ass as we do it about 2x a week. I crave the intense feeling when his hot cum shoots into my ass.

Faith yours is actually the first time I've read one of the Anal stories. I really enjoyed your story and will read more thanks to you. Hope you will continue writing and I know it takes time to write a good one like this.

Love the story...well written and makes you feel like you are there balls deep :)

You didn't just delve into sick animalistic pleasure that others somehow enjoy. It actually seemed like there was love there, between a married couple. Rare. But it's the way it should be. Excellent. 5 stars. Also, no profanity. Unheard of, but good. All around, and with the factors mentioned previous, the best I've seen. Well done.

Very sexy, but while I guess this isn't the place to correct someone about there grammar regardless I will, in the story you are mixing two perspectives and also two tenses those being; First Person(I) and Present tense and Second person(you) and future tense. This is completely incorrect grammar wise and rather distracting... When writing you need to choose First, Second or Third person you shouldn't mix and match where you feel like it.

Other then that great story.

I'm not a fan of second person but this was a well-written example. Great work!

I thought it was a great story about the fears and pleasures (and practical issues) of taking a cock up your ass. ;) Please give us more.

Love anal, it's my predilection. I was startled near the end, "Your hands caress my face and leaning in, your warm breath on my lips, YOU BREATH INTO ME, "You're welcome, Faith," and close the gap and softly kiss my lips."

"you breath into me" makes no sense in English. Did you mean "you breathe into me" or did you mean "your breath into me" ? Either of these last two would make sense. I mention it because I notice that so many authors here don't know the diff between breath and breathe, the noun and the verb. Or, did you just make a typo?

Good story, though - I love putting it in her ass!

Thank you I will look forward to more