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Great story!
How can she ever leave Balram? She deserves to have him all to herself. Arun deserves to watch them in action.
Can't wait
to read about Balram doing Shilpa with his wondrous cock.
And to read more about Balram, the kisser!
So hot!
How I love to read about this dominant old super-stud! He of course own Shilpa now.
Will he challenge Arun to his face?
looking forward to the next part
Liked part 1, loved part 2, wasnt sure if the direction of part 3 was right but youve managed to pick up the interest level in part 4 and 5. Keep going, cant wait till the next part!
why?
..is he seemingly okay with her screwing 3-4 other guys? she is a terrible person and obvious doesnt care about her husband or being caught. in fact, i believe in india for a long time, adulters (namely women) would be stoned to death or die in a honor killing. now, im not saying she should be, but im saying at the very least, he should leave arun because if he hadnt walked in on that old bastard playing grab ass, i very much doubt arun would have stopped any time soon. please dont make this one of the stupid stories about how the husband starts off angry, upset, etc. but then okays the cheating along as he knows about it, because thats retarded. i suppose hearing about in an erotic way ( which is obvious what aruns doing, shes hoping to turn him on so she can get away with it) can turn him on, i want to see him use his private eye to get proof of her cheating and leave divorce her. and in case any of you retards tell me its just a story or dont be harsh on her, well, you can go fuck yourselfs. some of these stories are meant to be fantasies and thus are not entirely credible, but a lot are written as if they are real, with what would actually happen in stale marriages, in cheating, hell, even in finding romance. that being said, most people wouldnt accept cheating and the idea that after a few yrs or so of divorce and you're ready to get back together is one of the dumbest things ive ever heard and yet, it seems to be a big story ender, along with the idea that people should always try to reconcile, which is stupid because sometimes its not possible. i think that about covers all the over used plot lines, so i hope you do something different, thanx for listening
Perfect.
Love the way you are teasing us. Can't wait for Balram to control both of them.
Just ignore the idiotic comments from the "moralists"
don't stop writing about this couple
I really enjoy this story, I hope you continue with it
Excellent- Keeping It Highly Charged & Interestig
I normally don't like multi-part stories as there's no suspense after the first episode where the deception or the "wow" part is revealed, and all the other episodes are like a porn flick where you just watch the fucking and more fucking without any storyline.
Not this one.
Each part ends at just the right level of suspense, with the continuing parts always starting where you left off. And again ending at a point where you want more!
Also, unlike most multi-part stories that get too full of themselves and get too bookish and long (and painful to read), this story in all its parts reads like a breeze.
The best story I've masturbated to in a long time - and I had to wait until I reached the end of part-5 before I allowed myself to let go!
Thank you, aurelius1982
make a weak person her master
make the most weakest and ugliest person in this story her master like mangal or savitri now
IF NO ONE SAYS SO
did anything happen, or do we guess. TK U MLJ LV NV
Bad?
I think she was very good, especially in the telling of her story. Made me quite horny and now I need a fuck! Got to read chapter 6
The joy is in the details
Well written
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