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Clean Up on Aisle 7

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by vrosej1008/02/09

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So true. That's a junk food binge I can get with. An excellent poem.See my poem My Favourite Sundae for discussion of said binge.

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by PandoraGlitters08/04/09

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by Bill Dada08/04/09

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No soy products for me. Great title, great poem, aisle 7 is where its at.

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by Transverse08/10/09

SO cool.

I like it; it's funny and lighthearted, but totally deep and poetic at the same time. I can't believe I'm saying this about a poem, but I love your meaningful simplicity.

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by Anonymous02/20/11

Sexy.

The indulgence of gluttony to satiate primal cravings is hot. And for the record, I would totally let you eat a greeezy BBQ flavor potato chip off my nipple. Twice. ;)

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