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EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
A spider ?

That's what comes to mind for me, perhaps a mythic one.

I know the rhyme requires 'creates', but I find it jarring and keep wanting to read it 'create'. Perhaps 'Pattern entices...'

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 14 years agoAuthor
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The wall ate her! engulfed her!

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