All Comments on 'Hentai Hotties: Green Jackets'

by Sean Renaud

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sadlittlelostboy over 14 years ago

Lovely, but short.

Lovely story, but it finished a little soon...

Anonymousover 14 years ago

Good but short

Good idea and a bit different but I for one would have liked it to be longer. Please follow-up!

Typo Fu Master over 14 years ago

Not bad

I liked it, but there's no good explanation why she couldn't return home. What was controlling her? Why didn't she know about it? She seemed to know of other cases where someone had been in a similar predicament.

Anonymousover 5 years ago

I mean

I knew I should have stopped reading when you described insects with dog dicks...but I didn't and so now I can never get those 5 mins of my life back. I award you no points and may God have mercy on your soul.

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