All Comments on 'Any Opportunity Will Do Ch. 17'

But the last handful of chapters have been somewhat boring compared to what you first wrote. The sentence structure is almost all the same - mostly noun-verb with little to break it up. Also, I noticed in later chapters a lot of sentence fragments and other grammatical errors, whereas I didn't spot them so much in earlier chapters. Finally, as you're drawing the story to it's conclusion, I don't think you need to fill us in on EVERYONE's life, such as Clive's family and loved ones, and other minor characters. It starts getting confusing. Stick with the characters who have meaning to the plotline. =D