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by Sapphos Sister08/03/09

I really love your poems but ....

I'm not sure that this is a palindrome. The second half, if read alone, doesn't really make any sense and doesn't add anything to the whole. It's just the lines of the first half in reverse. But the first half is a lovely and erotic poem in itself.

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by Bill Dada08/03/09

^

I have no idea what a palindrone poem is, so of course I have no idea if this is one. The first half is an okay erotic poem, it is the second half that works for me. It is as if Yoda had written an erotic poem. This is not a criticism, I loved it.

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by normal jean08/04/09

not a palindrome

"Able was I, ere I saw Elba."

Read front or back, it is the same. The same idea applies to the poem, it should read the same forward as backwards.

I came across a palindrome site once and there was a short story palindrome. This is a difficult challenge, but I just know you will pull it off!


Some examples-
Hannah, Bob, Pop, "A Toyota", tot, poop....and so on... I agree with the others, the first part is a good poem.

~ NJ

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by EroticOrogeny08/04/09

Palindrome by your example

The 2nd half starts out seeming out of sequence, but then picks up OK.

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