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Another Great Chapter!!!!
You wrote another great chapter in this series with Josh and Katrina. I like how was able to come back and find Josh. I like how you have developed the characters are both Josh and Katrina. I can hardly wait to see what you do with the next chapter.
Fucking PATHETIC!
'nuff said really. You are a pathetic writer, without the sense god gave a dodo bird! Maybe you should send your writing aspirations that way as well.
Waste of fucking space and time. Fucking pathetic.
Ignore the haters!
Fuck off you dumb asscrack! (last comment)The writing shandal did is amazing you really portray the charcters feelings exquisitely and who ever says you write bad could kiss your ass!!!
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