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Do Adam A Favor
Let him find a girl to love him than slut can go chase big cocks, if thats what she wants.
Wonderful Opportunity
You have a terrific opportunity to do the right thing. You can be brutally honest.
Tell Adam that you fucked Dan within 5 minutes of meeting him. Tell him you did so because he had a great body and after doing so you realized you would do it again. Tell him you are so shallow and self centered that you would throw away his true love and your years of relationship for a quick fuck from an insensitive jerk who could never be faithful to one person. Let Adam move on to someone who can be true to him.
You and Dan deserve each other.
Hot, hot, hot!!
The only thing I wish were different is if the fiance had put up more resistance to the muscle stud. I loved how he grabbed her hand and had her feel his hot body...very seductive. Of course, if I had been in her position, maybe I wouldn't have been able to resist much longer after that. lol
Not sure if you intend to write another chapter or not, but it would be great to see the fiance keep coming into contact with the hot roommate and for the hot roommate to keep up the seduction. Maybe she will try to resist even more, and he will keep wearing her down. Hot!
This is the hottest story I've read on here in a while. Keep up the great work!
Story of the Day
Congratulations on the story of the day. I can't wait till Dannyboy takes her again and I hope she protests all the while he buggers her. Cheers.
Wow
This story was hot and raunchy - please, please, please write more!
I'm curious.
A cuckold wimp British writer has written a story about a slut/whore of a fiance who admits to herself that Adam will never satisfy her like Dan can. She sits at home thinking about this choice she has to make. WHAT fucking Choice? Let her loved one go, let Dan fuck the SHIT out of her. Let him give her all sorts of infections. Now that sounds to me the way she should go. There is no point her trying to have any sort of realationship with Adam. She doesn't give a flying fuck about him. All she is worried about is where the next big prick is coming from. If you ever want to write a sequel, yes turn the bitch into the slut/whore that she is and for fucks sake let her LEAVE Adam BEFORE she does any creampieing. She has already Cucked him don't disrespect Adam any more. Just another point. Why is it that so called Macho men from the USA READ these types of stories? Hell I'm British I don't know any better do I?
ugh
the limeys are at it again..aside from author dick francis ( real name ) I have YET to read a GOOD ENGLISH WRITER!!!
good start
I liked it because it seemed realistic and made me feel for the main char. I hope you plan to continue. Just a friendly reminder to watch "head jumping". The story is told from her point of view, but for a second, it jumped into his POV, then back to her.
Dilemna?
She did not have a dilemna, she had the best of both worlds. She could continue to fuck this guy and even get pregnant with his baby, and then marry her boyfriend so he would be the legal daddy of her baby. Then she could fuck the baby's father more and have more babies by him, remaining married to her boyfriend. She had it made but just did not realize it.
Totally HOT
Having been in this situation before, the girl usually doesn't take that long to give in. We're all animals, at some base level, and it does no good to deny it...women want alpha males, simple and done.
awesome
really hot story...loved the way she just gives in to this stud...looking forward to how she "solves her dilemma" lol
She has no problem
She cant get her school work done. She is a round heeled whore that fucks anyone she meets so she will very quickly have HIV/AIDS if she doesnt now. What she should do is write Adam a letter of goodbye telling him what she had done, pack and move to Neveda and get a job in a brothel where they will at least take care of her and her medical needs. As a girlfriend, wife, or mother, she is just trash.
What do you think her mental illness is?
Reading and thinking about this girl when she meets this over grown little boy Dan brings out behavior that can oan only be described as self destructive and mentally ill. She may think she loves Adam but in reality the only person she loves is herself and even that is questionable. To answer a question posed by one brit reviewer, the reason USA macho men read this has two parts. First most of the stories here are written by brits sort of a forced choice. Second, we are attempting to help save the brits from themselves so that in the next war we dont have to come pull their asses out of the fire again.
Dan should die!
If I was in Adam's position and a "friend of mine" had just fucked the love of my life just for another story to tell his buds, and ruin my relationship, I WOULD FUCKING SLIT HIS THROAT!!!
Bull
What an oxymoron...I love my fiancee...but?
Is this what you as a writer think about all women?
so fucking wett
please this is so hot its the best story on litrotica please write more of dan and liz fucking right undear adams nose make them have a full blown affair with them having hot sex everwhere, adams a loser so please keep it going im so fucking wet right now for dan wish he could fuck me against a wall i fuck around on my husband all the time
Things will never be the same now
She'll never be satisfied now with Adam now,thats she's had a huge cock,and now with Dans baby growing inside her,she's really in the soup
Hopefully She's Pregnant
I hope Liz is pregnant - if not then Dan should fuck liz a few more times until he is certain he has planted a baby in her belly - would be good for Liz to give birth just after she marries Adam - that's another thing - after Liz & Adam get married it's too hard for Dan to resist her newly married snatch - obviously making her pregnant again - maybe the arrogant Dan could stick his cock up Adam's mother or sister or even Liz's mother or sister???? - making them pregnant in the process.
Thank you for a lovely kinky story.
Sarah Leather, London England
(fit, attractive, toned 32yo blonde married mum with two cute blonde daughters)
leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk
No she didn't have a dilemma
Dan would tell his mates and they would tell Adam and then their marriage would be over before it started. End of problem. She's a slut and doesn't deserve to be married.
Just another cheap slut.
No dilemma - she's a cheater and always will be one.
5 stars
agree, what dilemma? she cheated, typical long term relationships at a young age. she will learn, break up for some jock that will not offer a relationship, hope the next saga, the fiancé or ex fiance' makes it big on a tech deal.. she wants back and he replies no to sloppy seconds and a cheater to boot. kick her to the curb. enjoy life as a dishonest cheating slut.
More
I'm a cheating girlfriend and love it
Row row row your boat like a slut
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sequel! 5 stars
well done, sure she was a slut but not as slutty as some, very hot and that was the goal right, now when does she fuck the room mate next!? and what happens.
Only complaint was the sex wasn't long enough, or detailed (need more), but understandable due to story.
What dilemma?
They are not married. Adam is fortunate enough to have discovered his fiancee is a slut. There will be no marriage. And it's real cheap for Adam to dump her. Just remind her not to let the door hit her on her ass on the way out. And to never call or try to see him again. What decision did you think Liz had? None. It was all on Adam and she was history. Idiotic, unfinished story.
GREAT
Please do a follow up story to this. This is one of my top 5 favorite stories I've ever read here, and that's sayin quite a lot. I want the follow up to focus on her obsessing over Dan, and eventually her confessing to Adam, and confessing way more than Adam would ever want to actually know. PLEASE WRITE THIS FOLLOW UP
Yeah, a dilemma...
...problem is, though - your not the one to solve it. What happened, - got off on your own story and lost interest?
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