If you used "Spellcheck", it would be a better story.
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Anonymous08/08/09
editing
Dude, you need more than spell check. You need to proofread your story prior to submission. If you can't see the mistakes, find an editor.
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Anonymous08/08/09
Grammar, grammar, spelling!
Please get an editor if you're going to persist in writing for this site. It almost seems as if you deliberately use inappropriate homophones. The story, once you get past the spelling and grammar problems, is an interesting premise.
About your spelling and grammar. If I want good writing I go to the library. If I want real life then I come here. Unless I want wimp husband /whore wife stories, which I don't. I notice that everytime a person writes a story about a non cheating couple thet the only course of action the wimp/humility.whore lovers get at the writer with this anal rententive shit. Don't give up on writing stories that don't involve cheating wives,cuckolds and wimp husbands. NYMINUS
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Anonymous08/09/09
WTF
It's not JUST misspelled words. Wife's refers to something that belongs to a wife. Wives is the plural of wife. Hell, if you are going to write stories in nglish, you should at least know the language. I couldn't even read the lame ass story!
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Spelling
If you used "Spellcheck", it would be a better story.
editing
Dude, you need more than spell check. You need to proofread your story prior to submission. If you can't see the mistakes, find an editor.
Grammar, grammar, spelling!
Please get an editor if you're going to persist in writing for this site. It almost seems as if you deliberately use inappropriate homophones. The story, once you get past the spelling and grammar problems, is an interesting premise.
I see the anal retentive crowd is giving you hell
About your spelling and grammar. If I want good writing I go to the library. If I want real life then I come here. Unless I want wimp husband /whore wife stories, which I don't. I notice that everytime a person writes a story about a non cheating couple thet the only course of action the wimp/humility.whore lovers get at the writer with this anal rententive shit. Don't give up on writing stories that don't involve cheating wives,cuckolds and wimp husbands. NYMINUS
WTF
It's not JUST misspelled words. Wife's refers to something that belongs to a wife. Wives is the plural of wife. Hell, if you are going to write stories in nglish, you should at least know the language. I couldn't even read the lame ass story!
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