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How fucking changed everything

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by Anonymous

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by vrosej1008/10/09

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I loved this poem so much. It is a clever idea well executed. I want more!!!

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by lorencino10/14/09

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This is brilliant to the point of being refreshing (or is it the other way round?).

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by Bill Dada11/19/09

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Now that is the way to teach history.

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by XXplorher07/25/10

The 4th dimension, eh?

Hmm... very cool.

Interesting concept that (from my perspective; it’s a lot more dynamic than it is obvious) cleverly touches upon the mystical/time-bending aspect of sex in a manner you just don’t see. More importantly, the rhythm of the words laid beautifully, mate.

Good stuff!

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