by DeepGreenEyes
I loved this poem so much. It is a clever idea well executed. I want more!!!
This is brilliant to the point of being refreshing (or is it the other way round?).
Hmm... very cool.
Interesting concept that (from my perspective; it’s a lot more dynamic than it is obvious) cleverly touches upon the mystical/time-bending aspect of sex in a manner you just don’t see. More importantly, the rhythm of the words laid beautifully, mate.
Good stuff!