Disappointed since this is just rehashing an old plot for you with similar characters and goals.
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Anonymous08/12/09
Good beginning...
...don't be tempted to lose the edge by killing the tease...keep it going. Great job.
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Anonymous08/12/09
havent you Published story on same lines earlier??
Repeat of Idea, as i am sure u had submitted a story on the sme lines earlier...
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Gary
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Anonymous08/13/09
What an excellent start
This has all the ingredients for an excellent set of sequels. The well paced story, the build up of heat and the way everything points to pure pleasure.. is HOT
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Anonymous08/26/09
MORE
I hope there are hundreds of chapters if they are as good as this one, and I hope they go all the way many times, even with his wife present!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous08/18/10
This is an amazing series. I'm up to part 7 and it just keeps getting better.
Love It
I liked the suspense between the two characters. I have sis-n-law that is built like the one in your story. . .
MMMMMMMMM!
I know I couldn't pick her up with my tongue, but it would be fun to try.
Great! Story!!
I hope he gets to rebuild his sister in law's car
I hope he gets to go all the way with his sister in law. Thanks......Rich
Great Start!!!!!!!
all i have to say is more
Unreal, want more
I hope theres alot more
Unreal, want more
I hope theres alot more
complete repeat, but decent quality
Disappointed since this is just rehashing an old plot for you with similar characters and goals.
Good beginning...
...don't be tempted to lose the edge by killing the tease...keep it going. Great job.
havent you Published story on same lines earlier??
Repeat of Idea, as i am sure u had submitted a story on the sme lines earlier...
~
Gary
What an excellent start
This has all the ingredients for an excellent set of sequels. The well paced story, the build up of heat and the way everything points to pure pleasure.. is HOT
MORE
I hope there are hundreds of chapters if they are as good as this one, and I hope they go all the way many times, even with his wife present!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is an amazing series. I'm up to part 7 and it just keeps getting better.
more
Rockinng good start on this. I hope to see more
Great stuff
Always enjoy your stories. On to chapter two.
She will go all the way, of course but no anal.
That's what all us old perverts want.
Stroked my cock all the way while reading
I discovered this series at Chapter 9, and I knew I had to read from the start. Sizzling hott.
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