by NyxInTheNight
Been following this story since you started to post them :) I think your doing a good job. Yes there are a few grammatical errors, but that doesnt take away from the good chapters yo have written. Please continue. Im dieing to know whats going to happen next with Steven and Elissa. :)
I like this story and think you have a great plot the only thing is I think your dialogue is a bit stilted so it doesn't flow well otherwise keep up the good work!
I really am enjoying this story. I can't wait for you to update it.
Come on. Where is the rest? This is a fantastic beginning. Please don't give up on this story line.
This is a great story line. I really want the next part. Pleaaaaasssseeeee
Please, please, please finish this story....it is really good and I would like to know how it will end. Thank you!! :-)