All Comments on 'A Dancers Kiss Ch. 03'

by NyxInTheNight

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bad_girl69bad_girl69over 14 years ago
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Been following this story since you started to post them :) I think your doing a good job. Yes there are a few grammatical errors, but that doesnt take away from the good chapters yo have written. Please continue. Im dieing to know whats going to happen next with Steven and Elissa. :)

Black_KittenBlack_Kittenover 14 years ago
Good story

I like this story and think you have a great plot the only thing is I think your dialogue is a bit stilted so it doesn't flow well otherwise keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it.

I really am enjoying this story. I can't wait for you to update it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More!

Come on. Where is the rest? This is a fantastic beginning. Please don't give up on this story line.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent!

This is a great story line. I really want the next part. Pleaaaaasssseeeee

ladybug71ladybug71almost 13 years ago
Finish your story!!!!

Please, please, please finish this story....it is really good and I would like to know how it will end. Thank you!! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
please?

I would love you forever if you'd finish this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
in love with you forever

Beautifully written

MissValerieMarieMissValerieMarieover 10 years ago
Awww

I love this story wish you would continue..... so hott to.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good story

More chapters please............

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