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The Dragon's Heart Ch. 01

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by Anonymous08/12/09

Nice start...

Seems to me you might come across some trouble when trying to deepen your plot . . , because as it is, it's only one part mysterious, one part boring, and 2 parts shallow. I hope your next chapter is filled with suspense/action/some sort of twist in the plot that will give it some fire and excitement. I definitely see the potential in the story. I hope you will find it.

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by Dragonangel555508/13/09

More please

I like the way the story started out and looking forward to more of it. Good job.

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by dragon7503/20/10

it's a good tale

please continue .

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