Good story
and then this one line "you lezzie slut queer, eat my cunt bitch" killed the whole thing for me and I stopped reading.
I wondered when the incest part was going to come in... and then wow, it was such a shock... it really happened. Loved it, thanks so much for the read.
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Odd but kind of sweet
Good story
You Had A Great Story Going...
and then this one line "you lezzie slut queer, eat my cunt bitch" killed the whole thing for me and I stopped reading.
Excellent story, but...
I wondered when the incest part was going to come in... and then wow, it was such a shock... it really happened. Loved it, thanks so much for the read.
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