All Comments on 'Tricking My Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

part 2 please

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great ending!

calamity989calamity989about 13 years ago
lol

wow dude amazing i thought the end was so funny lol i love things like this if u got any suggestions for others like this email me

leebrookes@live.com

thanks 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
5/5

Amazing story! I suggest you make more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
2/5

Just a story fragment...

Even the ending was an obvious cliche twist as nobody could be that unaware unless blind with booze or drugs first. How were they supposed to un-switch after? If you're trying to write clever twists, try to put a bit more thought into them.

This wasn't even sexy enough to class as quick and dirty. It was just an unfinished idea perhaps?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I like!

Good story. Please keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Asshole

You are a big time loser!!!

CassieGirlIncestLoverCassieGirlIncestLoverover 11 years ago
Wow

Hot story, hope for another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hell no

This story is so dame fake.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
My sister is one hot little Whore!

I remember when I first fucked my sister and after the first time we did not fuck anyone else for almost two years! the week before my birthday now I still get to fuck her ass mouth and pussy! Fucking your sister might be sick but if you see my sister she is one good looking whore!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Do Something Different Next time

Any one can fuck and eat pussy but it takes real talent to eat your sisters asshole. Crawl in there again and tongue that puckered poop chute!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Busted!!!!!!!

that was hot, sister wanted BIG brother too

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice story

that was the best ending ever!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
karen nowell

Just like me fingering our Karen's cunt .so tight and smelly

ZacplayerZacplayeralmost 10 years ago
Nice but needs more

Dude that was nice but it needs more. You need another chapter to it because it just leaves you in suspense

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
ever again???

did u ever fuck her again

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
horny aussie

I liked the story but for one thing, the story was to short in length it would have been better if it was at least two pages worth, so you have to carry on with this story with another chapter and please make it with more than ONE!!! small page worth and please make big brother make his sister pregnant and maybe chuck in their mother and get her pregnant as well.

dirtyomandirtyomanover 9 years ago
Yes I agree.

You need more tails of fucking this hot wet sister. Never got to do my sis, she was always married to some big dick, but I got all my cousins!! Love Fucking Mom, storys.

Looking for chptr#2 #3 & beyond. My motto: "Incest is Best"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good sister

I fuck my sister's cunt.

HankWilliams1956HankWilliams1956about 8 years ago

That is a very hot story. It makes me want more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fucking lovely

I once fucked my step sister but this much hotter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fucking my sister

the concept of mutual desire to fuck each other, as young brother and sister, is absolutely mind-blowing. (pardon the pun) I could warm up all day, by sucking and smelling her used under panties, and sucking her used tampons. that she would leave in the wastebasket.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hmmmm

Don't know how far you went in the public school system, but your use of the English language is about the most atrocious I've ever seen. I'm not looking for a pulitzer prize winning author on this site, but damn. I don't know if you're just writing too fast and not going back over your work or what, but you really do need to go back over your work and read it through carefully before submitting it. Way too many mistakes in word usage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
started with her panties

Fell in love with my sister's panties. She found out. We were adopted and one thing led to another. Ending up fucking. It was wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I love MY SISTER and HER PUSSY cumm

ME and MY sister have Fucked from the age of 9 years old, and WE are now IN our late 40 and WE are now STILL live together and ride each other dayly AND I JACK MY ROD AND CUMM inside HER loads OF HOT JUICE AS THEY POUND MY THROBBING COCK DEEPLEY IN MY ASS AND THROAT AS I CHOKE ON cummm and swallowing evry DROP OF HOT JUICE AS THEY Explode in my mouth and face as, I LOVE Orgies WITH MY SISTER and HER PUSSY cumm gushing meat inside at once as I am MILKING THEM nutts and a BIG HORSE COCK DEEPLEY IN MY ASS AND THROAT AS I CHOKE ON cummm....

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
LOVE YOU too Cum in MY face and on MY cock

I Have Much RESPECT For HORSE COCK DEEPLEY IN MY MOUTH AND then IN Ass FUCKING THE HELL OUT OUT of MY BODY AND stretching my hole so BIG AND WIDE AND unloading ALL THAT HOT YUMMY creamy Cum all in my ASS AND THROAT AS I CHOKE ON cummm and swallowing his Dick DOWN MY NECK AS YOUR FORCING MY HEAD ALL THE WAY DOWN ON IT BADLY AND LLOTTS OF IT TOO while I am stroking myself and accomplishing CUMMING INSIDE you butt PUSSY AND YOUR ASS and CUMM ing ALL I N YOU AND YOURS PUSSY AND uterus impregnated YOU WITH MY mum so YOU can have a little BABY WE can get TO fuck n WE CAN SUCK AND teach sex with a transsexual and face as YOU FUCK MY THROBBING COCK DEEPLEY IN INTO YOUR ASS and CUMM DEEP INSIDE YOUR PULSATING PUSSY all the WAY INside filling YOU full of MY hot CUMM as I am MILKING THEM HORSE COCK DEEPLEY IN MY THROAT Mmmm yummy I want to try sucking donkeys DICKS TOO long dick FUCK me so HARD and blast me so full of your HOT YUMMY creamy Cum all in my mouth and face as YOU FUCK MY THROBBING COCK DEEPLEY IN MY ASS AND THROAT AS I CHOKE ON cummm and swallowing HUGE ERECT cock feeling my insides FULL OF CREAM AND MILK EVERY LAST DROP OF HOT JUICE

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

When my dad remarried ,my step mom she and i got along great ,she would let me skip school and she and i would go dig root all day in the woods, I was helping her dig a patch ,while she sat down and was digging I noticed up her dress she didn't have PANTIES on,,, she was Cherokee indian,,dark tan skin black hair and beautiful ,,I couldn't help not to look and stare up her dress at that beautiful PUSSY SHE had exposed to me ,,I kept digging ,not paying no mind to what I was doing ,,,just starring at her PRETTY PINK PUSSY and began to GET really stiff Dick she then says ,you like looking at my puss, I see YOUR COCK IS ALREADY it must LIKE WHAT you see,,I just shook my head YES, I was speechless, AS SHE LAY back and pulled up her dress and opened her legs far apart and started playing with herself in front of ME,,,,she's first was just shiny,wet looking then she became CREAMY white and juicy, she watched me watching her play with HER PUSSY, I PULLED my ROD out my pants and started stroking myself to her array of CREAMY CUM AS ,sweat,I SAY to her,,Can I have a taste of your fingers WITH HOT CUMM on them ,,,,,She said certainly can and let me lick her cummy fingers off ,,then I want you to lick MY CREAMY PUSSY OUT and I want to SUCK on that COCK AND maybe try to straddle YOU AND put your hard COCK DEEPLEY IN MY PUSSY AND BODY AS I SLIDE ALL OVER your Dick and SWALLOW IT UP in my PUSSY MAKING YOU CUMM IN MY BODY loads of HOT Cum MY boy,,,I want THIS to be mine and YOUR Secret,,,YOUR DADDY can t find out OK?? Ok I PROMISE, I won't TELL,,,and GOOD JOB she said ,,,and I like your DICK,,your better and lot bigger than your daddy,,,my PUSSY is ALL YOURs when DADDY not AROUND OK, OH MOM I LOVE YOU I SAID ,,SO WE FUCKED AND GAVE ONEANOTHER ORAL SEX DAILY 7DAYS A WEEK, WHILE DAD SLEPT WE PLAY THEY LET ME QUIT SCHOOL BECAUSE OF A WRECK I WAS HURT IN ,,BROKE BOTH ARMS AND LEG CAST ON BOTH ARMS AND LEG TO MY HIP,,, MY STEP MOM TOOK GOOD CARE ME ,WIPING MY BUTT AND BATHING ME ,HOLDING MY DICK WHILE I PISSED, AND ALL THE BLOW JOBS THAT I COULD EVER WANT,,,,AND SHE WOULD RIRE MY FACE AND MOUTH WITH HER PUSSY AND HER ASS HOLE AND THEN CUMMM ALL OVER MY FACE AND MOUTH AND THEN FUCK MY THROBBING COCK CRAZY AS WOULD CUMM ALL OVER HER PUSSY ,,,she has my BABY girl and DAD thought it was his dick THAT got her impregnated she used antisperm gell when THEY Fucked,,SAID MY THROBBING COCK DEEPLEY IN HER TIGHT HOLE CUMMING INSIDE WAS lots better than HIS little bit dick,,,SO I cummed IN HER PUSSY SO MUCH like a pornstar loadingher FULL OF CREAM AND MY babies,,,,and AFTER our daughter turned 14, mom said it was time to teach her how TO FUCK,,so I got to show here me poundingmom in the PUSSY AND she loved it and WANTS me to be on her PUSSY. I Am loving it,,fuckin MY Indian DAUGHTER and MY STEP MOM AT the SAME time, and sliding my MassiVE DONKEYDICK INTO MY 14 YR OLD SISTER//DAUGHTERS VIRGIN tight Fuck HOLE and CUMMING SO MUCH INSIDE HER SHE is pregnant with MY DADDY AND I CUMM inside HER PUSSY

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Close Friend Tricks his sister .

Unfortunately I don`t have the real sister I could kiss eat or put my dick in her box . I had friends who I knew were fucking their sisters . Peter was one of them . One day I asked him if I too could enjoy Cherry . his sister and he agreed to talk to her but she was not willing . But I was adamant . So One night he let me enter his house . I waited in lobby while they were fucking in bed room . I watched every thing through the window . Then while she was not looking . peter signaled me to switch off the lights > It was pitch dark and I entered the bed room and took the place between her legs and inserted my cock in side her pussy > She was already wet and it went in with ease > Before it Peter had already filled her twat with her cum > She did not say any thing but was surprised at the fast revival of her brothers cock . I fucked her hard for 15 minutes and I came inside her /

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
FANTASTIC SHORT STORY...AWESOME BEST SHORT FUCK STORY EVER!!!

Can't wait for the surprise.

Jim was getting a condom and her brother FUCKED HER BAREBACK..

Hope he will get to continue the pleasure.

prop69prop69almost 5 years ago
So AWESOME I had to read it again

One of the best!

Love another episode

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very good. Believable too.

Women aren't that clueless usually, so Karen noticing was the way to go. Also sometimes sisters do fuck guys like their big brothers (which if they're hotty smoking half Italian 10s that look like a cross between Sally Field & Marisa Tomei is more frustrating than hot, trust me). So good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Forgot my Rubber...

Forgot my Rubber...

Yeah, rite

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

yeah my cousin knew I was fucking her too, they aren't as stupid as we might think they are, We are the stupid ones.

DanDraperDanDraperalmost 2 years ago

I'm glad she knew the whole time, it made it even hotter that she wanted him as much as he wanted her.

Lust4SureLust4Sure8 months ago

Boy did you fuck me on this one?

I had a sister I wanted to fuck so bad, I decided just to get her drunk and then take her virginity. Except once I got her clothes off and I had my cock up against her lips getting ready to thrust into that dream box, my conscience stopped me. I put her clothes back on and put her to bed.

The next day, we were watching a romance movie together and she piped up and said; "WHY DIDN'T YOU FUCK ME LAST NIGHT?" I've been dreaming about you taking my cherry since I was 14. It took her six years, but I got her cherry. Boy did your fantasy bring back memories.

Lust4Sure

not4longbyme@yahoo.com

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