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Very nice
I really enjoyed the story, keep it up!
Hot "Ass" Story Jayne!
Loved it. To the point and explains your feminine point of view. Would loved to have been there to watch or take you the first time!
Rob
tense
"some guy cummed.."
cummed?
Huh?
After an orgasm, it means, you came.
"She cummed to the store with me'. "She came to the store with me".
"That was good, I came" "that was good, I cummed".
Average anal romp.
Sounds like it was written by a man, though.
That's a nasty pub you're hanging out in!
Struth, what kind of a pub are you guys hanging out at where a bloke jerks off onto a woman's clothes? That's freakin' nasty!
Anyway, liked the story, especially the movie style opening telling you how it ended and then retelling the tale. Keep on writing!
good, but...
It was a good read, and the sex was steamy. You could stand to have more of it, though.
You Got 5 From Me!!!
That was awesome....
you got 2 warm loads from that one.....in less than an hour!
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