All Comments on 'Night Train to Paris'

A good, satisfying story; thank you.

A fine piece of writing, marred only slightly by inconsistencies in tense in a couple of places. Thank you.

Loved it...the romantic in me is so drawn to this type of encounter. Thanks for a story well written.

Garage Girl: This is not LIT it's lilterature... a sparkling gem in the dross. Are you an accomplished author taking a sort of busman's holiday here at LIT? If you're not you should pitch some of your stuff over as many trnnsoms as you can find. If I were an editor you'd be in. I am both inspired and frustrated; inspired to try to approach the quality of your writing (I've six pieces posted) and frustrated because you've set the bar so high. I am also delighted and pleasured to read a really fresh and exciting take on the "strangers on a train" genre. Best wishes and I hope we've not seen the last of your stuff! Kal

This is the best thing I've ever read on this site. Excellent writing, and a very pleasant story, leaving us anxious for the next chapter.