Great start to what should be a great story. i enjoyed reading this story & I can't wait to read the next chapter. There will be another chapter won't there?
I think the reason why is it falls into the realm of "magical" which isn't my kind of story. If I am right, that is probably why I didn't like it. There are very few "magical" stories I like. I guess the story is okay but I really started to breaze it at some point for it was losing my interest fast.
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Anonymous08/15/09
JAHBDS.!
Just another "Huge Big Penis story - I quit when I got to that part, ruins the whole story.!*
I enjoyed the story, it would have been better if her son fucked her instead of sometime later. Maybe another chapter would keep the story going and make it hotter.
A lovely, lyrical piece of erotica. I would love to see it continued, but will treasure it as is. Well done!
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Anonymous08/20/09
Excellent!
Fabulous story! Attaboy! I love the slow pace, could have been even closer!
Kristin (yes, a mom)
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Anonymous01/07/10
Why the magic?
Very good. But it would be still better without the shoes having a magic power. Nice red shoes shouldn't need to be magic to give the son a big hard on when he'd see his mother wearing them!
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Anonymous02/08/10
Jesus! What a fucking hot story. I hope the rest is as good as this has promised!
I really enjoyed it but I do think 'Why the magic "
is right. Hell. . . if my mother wore a pair of patent red
or black heels and did things with them to get me
hard, that's all the magic I'd need. keep writing !
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Anonymous04/28/16
Love the story of the red shoes
The high heels and sexy dialog had me wet in my pantyhose and panties. Mom too enjoyed the incestuous story of the red shoes and the other details of the most incredible incestuous and naughty but nice hot and deliciously perverted hot action.
English
Fantastic beginning.
Great start to what should be a great story. i enjoyed reading this story & I can't wait to read the next chapter. There will be another chapter won't there?
I didn't care for it much
I think the reason why is it falls into the realm of "magical" which isn't my kind of story. If I am right, that is probably why I didn't like it. There are very few "magical" stories I like. I guess the story is okay but I really started to breaze it at some point for it was losing my interest fast.
JAHBDS.!
Just another "Huge Big Penis story - I quit when I got to that part, ruins the whole story.!*
A fantasy of magic in the new shoes
I enjoyed the story, it would have been better if her son fucked her instead of sometime later. Maybe another chapter would keep the story going and make it hotter.
Magical Indeed!
A lovely, lyrical piece of erotica. I would love to see it continued, but will treasure it as is. Well done!
Excellent!
Fabulous story! Attaboy! I love the slow pace, could have been even closer!
Kristin (yes, a mom)
Why the magic?
Very good. But it would be still better without the shoes having a magic power. Nice red shoes shouldn't need to be magic to give the son a big hard on when he'd see his mother wearing them!
Jesus! What a fucking hot story. I hope the rest is as good as this has promised!
love my 72 y o mother wearing nylons 6" spike high heels to bed
Little red riding heels
Mmmmmm, looking forward to reading ch 2 hun. Slipping into my red 5 inch strappy sandals now. I have a shy young son to tease.
Thank you!
For the lovely comments anonymous! Feel free to message me.
Good story
I really enjoyed it but I do think 'Why the magic "
is right. Hell. . . if my mother wore a pair of patent red
or black heels and did things with them to get me
hard, that's all the magic I'd need. keep writing !
Love the story of the red shoes
The high heels and sexy dialog had me wet in my pantyhose and panties. Mom too enjoyed the incestuous story of the red shoes and the other details of the most incredible incestuous and naughty but nice hot and deliciously perverted hot action.
fucking love this story
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