All Comments on 'Golden Keeper Ch. 12'

by Marione

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lofolo24lofolo24over 14 years ago
More!!!!!

I hope the ending means you will contiune the story. I would love to read Orion and Ana's story.

trinisamplertrinisamplerover 14 years ago
please!!

you cannot mean to leave it this story like that!!!...i really hope you continue orion and ana's story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Flawless!

Your writing should be put into a book that should then be made into a movie. You are a freaking genious of the written

word! I am not pulling your chain! I can't wait to find out

what happens next! You have the different characters seperate stories merging beautifully with the story about the main character(s)! I bow in the presence of such greatness and thank you most humbly for letting us mere peons partake of your glorious written words.

YOU F-ING ROCK AND YOU TOTALLY KICK LITERARY A@#!!!!!!!!

tanilctanilcabout 14 years ago
wonderful

absoutly wonderful story. i hope you continue anna and orion's story. and rikita we need to find out about her accident. keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
what???!!!!

Ana can speak??

i am so confused happy and disappointed that its the end to this story and i liked the ending, but i am so lost as to what happened to orion and ana!! please continue their story!!!! aaaahhhh i am on my hands and knees begging!

MabelCinnamonMabelCinnamonabout 14 years ago
Wonderfull work

I loved this story... Great epilogue and I would definitely not mind a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
write more please

write more about Ana

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
LOVE IT! & A SEQUEL PLEASE!!!

Your story was awesome!! haha... Hopefully you get to do a sequel about Anna & Orion. I really want to know what's going to happen betweeen them. Please post more really, really, really soon!!!

mikothebabymikothebabyalmost 14 years ago
more, more, more

What a talented writer you are. I want more, more and more. I would love to see what happens to all the other characters, Ana, Emmett, Fina and her husband, etc. Please write tons and tons more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
wonderful

very few have i read that can leave such a good cliffhanger always leave them wanting more and hopefully more will be coming

catman71catman71about 13 years ago
more please

this story was awesome , want to know what happens

NightpleasureNightpleasureabout 13 years ago

really nice story. more please.

bearmad1963bearmad1963about 13 years ago
LOVED IT

PLEASE PLEASE write another chapter soon this is very good.

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 13 years ago
Very good

But it feels like there is room for a sequel or two. You could definitely follow up on Ana and Orion, and write another on Kita. Then there is her mother's life as an immortal with Jatteo, or maybe more on Finn and Emmett. You have a great deal of potential material here, so keep writing!

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaover 10 years ago
WELL,,,,,,,TOTALLY PI$$ED,,,

NO ENDING,,after all that,,,,really sucks,big time....what a waste of my time,getting hooked on this story,,,i hope this is not your idea of a final chapter,,,but since its been almost 3 years,,i guess its over,,,,you join the ever growing ranks of the unfinished group of writers on here,,,just downright not fair......

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
dear countrygirlfla

Grow the fuck up and write your own damn work of fiction, or maybe reach into your wallet and buy a professional, completed work of fiction instead of "wasting your time" trying to bully writers on this site who offer their work for FREE and who are in no way beholden to you for jack shit! Other readers on this site appreciate the work of this writer and others and do not need your type of negative, personal, psychotic nonsense discouraging them from writing.

GhazghkullGhazghkullover 7 years ago

OR you could work on finishing the story if you really like it 8-)

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