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by UnderYourSpell08/14/09

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Really different and thought provoking and I am very jealous! Not of the broken toe but of the idea!

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by vrosej1008/16/09

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Clever! I think this might be the best of your poems so far. This is a delightfully gentle and tender work that tugs at the heart strings. I really like this one a lot. Keep it up :-)

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