All Comments on 'Falling'

by Sapphos Sister

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 14 years ago
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Lovely just lovely thankyou for the read

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
like it

Fear is so powerful - I wonder how much it costs us.

PhaonsBrotherPhaonsBrotherover 14 years ago
I took your hand

I took your hand at your auntie's grave,

your breezy sables wan,

for sennight I held you dear 'til day,

when all sensate had gone,

You couldn't speak, save devotedly,

and held me to the task,

of guarding you from misery,

when you couldn't hold the masque.

vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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I'm feeling you. This is exactly how I felt after my first marriage ended. It's hard to suck up the fear and move on, but that being said, good things await. I love this one.

peachesmelbapeachesmelbaover 14 years ago
thank you my friend

in the middle of one more breakup, with the thought of becoming "the crazy cat lady" staring me in the face (and i already have a cat...)-good to remember we have to take the chance...and falling...fly

IraniaIraniaover 14 years ago
Coolio

Love the ending. Can't let the stuff--stiff you. Me likes, bunches sister. One dozen bigerest *roses*

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