All Comments on 'Pre-Bachelor Party'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Dont usualy go for stories like this.

Yeah I know sounds weak, I actual believe in fidelity. But the way this started it drew me in. Sounded like guy getting advice on love making. But in flagrante delicto, was a twist. Enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well written.

Pretty hot. More, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Is this supposed to be clever?

More like just plain crud.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
too bad dad didn't get to wet his dick in her

His dad and his brother should fuck her at the wedding

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Glad

I'm not in this family, mental illness seems to be the norm. I guess incest will do that. Not sure what the sluts excuess is but she should charge and make a little money, that always comes in handy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
there

is nothing to add to this

bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Fascinating!

Well written, but the subject matter left my stomach a bit

perturbed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hard to

wrong place, mantally retarded authors not wanted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
PLEASE

Don't post part 2!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well you have the mentality right

but I am sorry I dont get into immature stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
not bad

Not bad. needed a little more detail, dad was a little too creepy (I thought it brought the whole story down a notch when he talked about "tasty pie") anyway keep going, I would like to see more.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Jeez Its a fantasy Guys

If I understand correctly, this section is for fantasies about not quite normal relationships. I think this fits the Bill

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sickly Sad or Sadly Sick or Both

Swinger eh - that explains most of it however not the crude immature selfish nonsensical irrational disrespect and male humiliation crap.<P>

Life will catch up to you and extract payment as it always does to those who selfishly ignore reality and the humanity of others.<P>

Go away little sick one as you are a drain on society.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Why are you married?

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newtype2525newtype2525about 11 years ago
more???

between the two accounts I wish that this story would continue! it has been years but I hope that one day soon we see more chapters. including a bachelor party and maybe even a lust filled wedding and reception!

hope you are still out there!

cheers!

GoodhueGoodhuealmost 8 years ago

Crapola! This story is the equal to a Hillary vs Trump Presidential race.Total shit with only losers!

newtype2525newtype2525over 4 years ago
10 years!

Still wish to read your cum back here! :)

GiganticGiganticabout 1 year ago

Damn, damn, damn it was as good as the first one. I am like his Dad, sure wish I could get a piece of that pie. I guarantee he would always remember it. Now please write some more of this tale. We have a bachelor party to have although it may be a year after the wedding or tomorrow if need be. Just make it so. I can see numerous stories with these folks the stars in them.

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