Yeah I know sounds weak, I actual believe in fidelity. But the way this started it drew me in. Sounded like guy getting advice on love making. But in flagrante delicto, was a twist. Enjoyed it.
His dad and his brother should fuck her at the wedding
by
Anonymous08/17/09
Glad
I'm not in this family, mental illness seems to be the norm. I guess incest will do that. Not sure what the sluts excuess is but she should charge and make a little money, that always comes in handy.
Well written, but the subject matter left my stomach a bit
perturbed.
by
Anonymous08/17/09
hard to
wrong place, mantally retarded authors not wanted.
by
Anonymous08/17/09
PLEASE
Don't post part 2!!!!!
by
Anonymous08/18/09
Well you have the mentality right
but I am sorry I dont get into immature stories.
by
Anonymous08/18/09
not bad
Not bad. needed a little more detail, dad was a little too creepy (I thought it brought the whole story down a notch when he talked about "tasty pie") anyway keep going, I would like to see more.
between the two accounts I wish that this story would continue! it has been years but I hope that one day soon we see more chapters. including a bachelor party and maybe even a lust filled wedding and reception!
hope you are still out there!
cheers!
English
Dont usualy go for stories like this.
Yeah I know sounds weak, I actual believe in fidelity. But the way this started it drew me in. Sounded like guy getting advice on love making. But in flagrante delicto, was a twist. Enjoyed it.
Well written.
Pretty hot. More, please.
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Is this supposed to be clever?
More like just plain crud.
too bad dad didn't get to wet his dick in her
His dad and his brother should fuck her at the wedding
Glad
I'm not in this family, mental illness seems to be the norm. I guess incest will do that. Not sure what the sluts excuess is but she should charge and make a little money, that always comes in handy.
there
is nothing to add to this
Fascinating!
Well written, but the subject matter left my stomach a bit
perturbed.
hard to
wrong place, mantally retarded authors not wanted.
PLEASE
Don't post part 2!!!!!
Well you have the mentality right
but I am sorry I dont get into immature stories.
not bad
Not bad. needed a little more detail, dad was a little too creepy (I thought it brought the whole story down a notch when he talked about "tasty pie") anyway keep going, I would like to see more.
Jeez Its a fantasy Guys
If I understand correctly, this section is for fantasies about not quite normal relationships. I think this fits the Bill
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Sickly Sad or Sadly Sick or Both
Swinger eh - that explains most of it however not the crude immature selfish nonsensical irrational disrespect and male humiliation crap.
Life will catch up to you and extract payment as it always does to those who selfishly ignore reality and the humanity of others.
Go away little sick one as you are a drain on society.
Why are you married?
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more???
between the two accounts I wish that this story would continue! it has been years but I hope that one day soon we see more chapters. including a bachelor party and maybe even a lust filled wedding and reception!
hope you are still out there!
cheers!
Crapola! This story is the equal to a Hillary vs Trump Presidential race.Total shit with only losers!
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