All Comments on 'Why I Can't Finish a Story'

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oriondogoriondogover 14 years ago
Oh you bad girl

so naughty and nice and lots of spice.

tabbertabberover 14 years ago
very well done

I enjoyed the "click of the sliding door" it added some excitement and realism to the story. Now I'm off to read more!

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