All Comments on 'Shy Indian Wife Opens Up Ch. 03'

by aurelius1982

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A good fast moving chapter

A little bit of tease and some nice exhibition, with a little extramarital sex act. Very good and hope to see more soon. Thanks ....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Some Suggestions

Hi,

I was just thinking if for the next part maybe the subordinate asks the woman to sit on his lap while they eat. she feeds him and herself and he fingers her and teases her etc

IftheshoefitsIftheshoefitsover 14 years ago
I adore bela

This is very good. I enjoy it just as much as your other series but for completely different reasons. I like the slow build, it adds realism, a woman does not simply become a whore over night. Bela is a good girl who is clearly dying inside to be naughty. It reminds me in some ways of how my own wife overcame her shyness of sex and nudity. It also reminds me of how highly erotic it can be to see a womans sexual progression in slow motion...when you are there everyday to watch her transform before your eyes. Indeed, the slow journey of a sexually inhibited wife into becoming a wanton slut can be just as arousing as what happens when she's already become one. In many ways, even more so.

I'm no expert on grammar, structure and other more in depth critiques of literature so I'll leave that alone, but what I can say is the content of the story is excellent. This is turning out to be a great read and I do hope there is more to follow. I'm dying to see what bela does next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Really neat

fluctuaterfluctuaterover 10 years ago

Beautiful .. excellent writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Excellent!!!!

My wife and I really enjoyed this. I read the stories to her at bed time :-)

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