exception. I look forward to the inevitable story of the cruise plus the building of the ad agency to give Gerry more time for his three lovelies and any strays they attract to their beds.
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Anonymous02/07/11
good but
needs a good editor and when are you going to learn the second chapter of a series HAS to have the same title as the first retitle this and use your head for more than a seat cushion from now on
From time to time, I see comments on an older piece. This is one of them.
Yes - PROFESSIONAL writer. Mea Culpa on the original spelling error and when I send work into my publishers, I do have an editor and even they miss things. People are human - I try to be more careful theze daze but weer all hueman.
As for not titling the story as Chapter Two - I usually do if I am writing them as a part of a while. However, if they're sequels - an idea comes to me - I don't see the need if I mention the preceding stories, which I did here. "Rooster Cogburn" isn't entitled "True Grit 2", for example. I am trying to be more judicious about that nowadays, but again - just have fun and enjoy the story on its own merits. I certainly gave you enough data in the story that it should read fine on its own.
English
Love the Story
This time when they go on the Cruise maybe you could keep it Simple by Making it Chapter#2 of Terri,Terry,Gerry & Wife?
Curt
I always enjoy BrettJ's stories and this is no
exception. I look forward to the inevitable story of the cruise plus the building of the ad agency to give Gerry more time for his three lovelies and any strays they attract to their beds.
good but
needs a good editor and when are you going to learn the second chapter of a series HAS to have the same title as the first retitle this and use your head for more than a seat cushion from now on
DBRS
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From time to time, I see comments on an older piece. This is one of them.
Yes - PROFESSIONAL writer. Mea Culpa on the original spelling error and when I send work into my publishers, I do have an editor and even they miss things. People are human - I try to be more careful theze daze but weer all hueman.
As for not titling the story as Chapter Two - I usually do if I am writing them as a part of a while. However, if they're sequels - an idea comes to me - I don't see the need if I mention the preceding stories, which I did here. "Rooster Cogburn" isn't entitled "True Grit 2", for example. I am trying to be more judicious about that nowadays, but again - just have fun and enjoy the story on its own merits. I certainly gave you enough data in the story that it should read fine on its own.
Thanks for the comments - I do read them all.
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