I liked it very very much. Don't take any negative feedbacks you might receive.
A hell of a good story, I only wish that there were more sex between dad and daughter written. I guess I'm just selfish in wanting to read about hot fucking and pussy sucking. I imagine her little pussy was sore after the week end was over.
It was a pretty sweet story and rounded off nicely... though as usual short stories like this could use a bit more length.
Every father deserves to take her daughters virginity.........
Very nice story
Like, WOW!! A really good story, well written. Congratulations. Keep up the good work. Thank you.
Why would she dress up like that if she wasn't sexually interested in her dad. Awful. Plus the sex was bland and boring.
quick but i enjoyed it. part two maybe?
This story shows you have one he'll of an imagination. Keep writing.
This story is not yours. This story was written by Lubrican aka Beating Off Bob. You are reported for plagiarism.
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What a story...
I liked it very very much. Don't take any negative feedbacks you might receive.
A great story, a little like a fantasy Sci-fi
A hell of a good story, I only wish that there were more sex between dad and daughter written. I guess I'm just selfish in wanting to read about hot fucking and pussy sucking. I imagine her little pussy was sore after the week end was over.
Cute
It was a pretty sweet story and rounded off nicely... though as usual short stories like this could use a bit more length.
Every father deserves to take her daughters virginity.........
Very nice story
Quite a Story!
Like, WOW!! A really good story, well written. Congratulations. Keep up the good work. Thank you.
stupid.
Why would she dress up like that if she wasn't sexually interested in her dad. Awful. Plus the sex was bland and boring.
nice
quick but i enjoyed it. part two maybe?
Nice
This story shows you have one he'll of an imagination. Keep writing.
Thief!
This story is not yours. This story was written by Lubrican aka Beating Off Bob.
You are reported for plagiarism.
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