All Comments on 'It's All Becoming So Clear Ch. 03 Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Story.

Keep it up. It has good flow and i cant wait to see what happens.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic story.

I really enjoy reading this series so far, it is terrific. I hope you will write the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loving it.

Its perfect as far as I'm concerned. I love the realism of it, please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
please wright the ending

i liked the story but it just stops which is boring.

gjames17gjames17about 8 years ago
This is where it ends?!

I know it's been years, but could you add another chapter or two? Please? This is a bad spot to just leave it hanging. This great story is begging for some type of resolution. Thank you for what you've shared, so far.

Leapyearbaby29Leapyearbaby29about 7 years ago
Continue!

Please continue this! Great story! Can you make longer chapters? It's been 8 years. Can you update?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Add More Please

It's a great story, like one of the best. I've waited for you to finish this for so long. Please Finish it.

liz33ndliz33ndover 5 years ago

this is so short. exciting but short.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 5 years ago
not bad

And yes it was short, but still a good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
you djdn't tell the truth....

I've been waiting for the continuation. It still hasn't arrived. Sigh.....

AntneilAntneilabout 3 years ago

Where is the continuation?

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