by freefallwithme
Keep it up. It has good flow and i cant wait to see what happens.
I really enjoy reading this series so far, it is terrific. I hope you will write the next chapter soon.
Its perfect as far as I'm concerned. I love the realism of it, please write more!
i liked the story but it just stops which is boring.
I know it's been years, but could you add another chapter or two? Please? This is a bad spot to just leave it hanging. This great story is begging for some type of resolution. Thank you for what you've shared, so far.
Please continue this! Great story! Can you make longer chapters? It's been 8 years. Can you update?
It's a great story, like one of the best. I've waited for you to finish this for so long. Please Finish it.
I've been waiting for the continuation. It still hasn't arrived. Sigh.....