It's Complicated Ch. 03

Yay!

I liked this chapter. Im curious to know if Lyn tells her bf and where this leaves the two friends. More please!

Decisions

i so think cohen and lyn need to either be with each other or the others. and i thikn cohen needs to get his crap straight. i think this story is really good. Just giving u my thoughts. I'm not tryin to discourage u. =)

good work

Good story, but you need to keep track of your tense agreements (ie: grabs vs grabbed, have vs had). Aside from some minor grammar issues, you're lookin good!

Great Story

Thanks for a great read. Pierce is something else. I am glad Jayln was saved by the phone. She doesn't need to be another notch on his belt. What did his dad do to his mother for him to hate him so much? Thanks

LOVE IT

And cock blocked by the boyfriend...poor thing... and Pierce way to bang away your frustrations I am thoroughly entertained... still hate Devin

damn

she was so close, damn devin