by velvet hammer
Mrs Anderson is such a HOT married, middle-aged whore!!! I LOVED this! I want to hear all about her cheating ass! Maybe she'll get in bed with little Bobbie Gershwin and teach her how to be a hot little whore!
This definitely needs more chapters, there is so much potential here.
This story has so much potential. I know so many plots you can write. Please contact me. Sorry for my bad english, I am German.
damn thats fuckin hot, I'mm looking forward to future instalments
Cant wait to see if he take her as his slut, the whore she wants to be treated as
Looks like this is the end. To bad it could have been good for at least three more chapters. Thanks for sharing.
Half the story was the same as the first one. We got the blow job story the last time.
There was no seduction. He's not even kissed her or gone down on her.
There is so much content you have missed out.
It was hurried, lazy writing.
I've read a couple of your stories. The pattern is the same---you offer a very minimal plot line, very quickly move into some sexual activity and then quit. You offer the barest inference of a plot, but you quit before it's even a story. This isn't writing; it's barely more than just typing (or is it now called keyboarding?)
One trick pony, This part should’ve been part of the first submission. Thus was just a masturbation screed, and not particularly interesting.