All Comments  for

A Cold Night

byjimbo_22©
All
Comments (16)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/21/09

Strange story

This story started out with such promise. It built up slowly, setting the stage for a very loving story, and then poof! the spark was lost and the story went downhill from there. Should of stayed with the premise he was going to seduce his mother, or they 'accidentally' found each other. The story line you ended with just didn't fit the beginning, and to be honest, I stopped reading midway through. Such a shame as it was such a good story, then turned into a strange one.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/21/09

Ummm

The story started good and went to shit (no pun intended). This, folks, is how to ruin a good one.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by motherfucker7408/21/09

FAILED!!!

This had so much promise, but as soon as I got to the point of him going to the bathroom, putting vaseline on, then opening his mothers mouth, I know people do weird shit but this was just plan DUMB!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/21/09

Vasoline???? WTF!

Yet another story demonstrating WHY LITEROTICA NEEDS STORY SUBMISSION STANDARDS!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by digdaddyrich08/22/09

I love it, he was really careful not to hurt her

I think it's time he gets to fill her pussy with his cum, it will make her feel younger, and feel better about herself if he keeps her well fucked. Thanks for the good story.....Rich

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by taxpapabob08/26/09

Comfort Thy Mom!

This is the start of a pretty good sex saga. Other readers seem to find it indecent; they are nuts. We do need more foreplay. But I like this story very much, and its wise ending.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/09/09

Sizzling

Cheers, Jim. The story was brief but erotic nonetheless.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by digdaddyrich09/05/11

A little short

I would have liked to see more build-up, but the story was sill a good read.

Too bad that she wasn't in child bearing age, it would have been really kinky if he knocked her up, when he finally got around to fucking her pussy.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/13/11

ewwwwwww gross!

Cigarettes and buttsex with vaseline. Nasty!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by fireguy36504/01/12

Missing something

Unless there was something going on that we didn't know, why would he think that he could butt fuck his mother just because they are trying to stay warm? Was there a message from Mom to lead her son on? Where was the foreplay that would make him think she wanted it in the ass? Sorry, but the story doesn't lead me to believe this was the first time if it was that easy.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sam5942203/18/13

I had the same experience.

My mother and I have had sex and it was a very erotic experience.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/13/13

sex with mother

I was in a similar position at my mothers with the weather and cold etc but I just said I was cold and asked if could I get in to bed with her , she said yes so I stripped and climbed in .
I put my arm around her, got hold of her tit and asked her if I could fuck her ,she didn't say anything but ripped of her nightie opened her legs pulled me to her and then said it took you a long time to ask ,so get on with it.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/10/14

Poor

Very poor writing, I think it had the potential to be great but you need more build up of the story. This didn't feel taboo at all, just two people having sex... practice though, I also recommend spell/grammar check.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/07/15

Smoking is not hot

Title

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/06/15

WHAT ANOTHER SHIT PUSSHER. NOT NEEDED

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/18/15

Don't think so

So mom takes his cock in her ass as the first time they fuck? Most women don't even like anal let alone a first time incestuous tryst.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to A Cold Night  or
More submissions by jimbo_22.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel