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Finding a New Life Ch. 13-14

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by mylilwildone08/22/09

Good But..

I like your stories, but you don't give a very clear picture of time frame. Things like court take time....things like chemo take time. Everything seems so rushed and I think part of the story gets lost in how rushed things are.

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by Anonymous08/22/09

Love it!

I love it! I just love the suspense! Cant wait for more! If cater hurts her! Ahh! Cant wait for more! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

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by shortydee04/07/10

wow

this is a very good story, please check the name in the flashback. it went from Carter tp Chase back to Carter.

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