All Comments on 'Back From Iraq'

This story is a good start, we can't wait for next chapters!

Lucky Lil' Brother!

i really like good bro/sis stories but hate it when the writer feels it is ok for one or both to cheat on thier spouse it ruins what could have been a good story from now on keep the cheating out once i got to that part i stopped it wasn't worth continuing it's a real shame

Though the Uvula doesn't control the gag reflex. Some people simply do not have one.

Good hot sex may be a fine way to express patriotic gratitude to the boy back from Iraq. (God knows our government is not doing dick for these men.) But sneaking around your devoted husband ain't good, and she talks like she's the neighborhood blowjob queen. This tale needs further development in sequels.

Blow jobs are nice but to get to blow a big load up his sisters pussy would have been out of this world, Maybe next time he will get to have sis all of the way.

Fuckin' would have been better, but that was one hell of a blow job scene! Give us more.

Most un-sexy "dirty" words ever.

I'm definitely not a hater of this one. Having been to Iraq a couple times, having this done when I got home would've blown my mind. Love the story so far. Great job.

I seriously could not stop laughing my ass off. I mean for god's sake watch porn and take proper sexy words from them, not words like "dork" and "weiner" what the fuck is that shit. Stop writing! You're killing peoples hard-ons and ladies arousal's

I like the type of ending were the brother and sister end up "Happily Ever After"

The phrase "on behalf of a grateful nation' is usually heard at a much sadder occassion, I like your use a lot better...an old Gunny

Well, lets see. You have a story that could be great, but there is more to a great story than just sex. If you just focus on the sex, then you miss out on all the human factor. Don't get me wrong, I like the sex, but there is a lot more to life than just sex.

Just my 2 cents worth.

Looks like a fun start! Lot of chapters so dont know if it will hold my interest that long or not.

Gotta agree with another poster on the dick words, trying to constantly call it something cute and different every time was highly distracting from the story and a deflater :/. Ive seen a few other authors try it as well, never really works unless the point of the story is satire.

While I don't think its slick doing it while hubby is home, I really dont consider doing your brother cheating. Family doesnt count! :)

Not really a blowjob fan, as a guy I could take them or leave them, just nothing that special about them to me. That being said, she did a rocking job! Hehe ;).

If I was going to have the dream blowjob (well, actually cumming from one would be a good start, lol) it would start with the girl being asian, now thats a fetish of mine, mind you, but it works out since the next requirement is that she has to be a pearl diver! Gotta have that lung capacity and hold your breath for a loooong time, hehe! She would deepthroat, do the throat squeezing tricks too, also she needs one of those crazy, long tongues! All the way down, throat squeezing as she moves up and down an inch or so while she licks my balls all over! Whew! Now if her tongue could reach my ass.... ;)

Hooters? Quimby? War hero depressed because of lack of a piece of ass? GTFOuttahere!

It sucked lol.

MEH!

At least she didn’t give him sloppy seconds,, but just a deep throat so she don’t have to taste it ,, kind of boring in a way

Made me cum...