I got in to a rhythm - on Scorp's page then started clicking on links of yours (I had both author pages open) sorry - the critiques and comment were appropriate to your stories though my apologies sincerely I will add this too all the places I can find with the wrong name - really very sorry -
READ IT AGAIN AND ITS UTTER SHIT .A WOMAN WHO CHEATS SHOULD BE GONE NO WAY TAKE A SLUT BACK
write a story where the wife cheats, the hubby finds out and kicks her to the curb? No plot is necessary so long as the woman suffers permanent financial and emotional lose and the torch the bitch boys can have something to jerk off to?
Quite the drama that ended in quite a funny and entertaining way. Good Ending? ^__^
Billy nailed it as pure shit and that is precisly what it is!
Polynesian for "cuckold"
ignorance is showing, I'm not married. And I still agree with Billy's assesment of this story. Your defination of my name is completly wrong.
I enjoyed the little tale. Not sure what the song inspiration was, though. I thought the wife learned her lesson the hard way (haha). Loved the double entendre's. I empathized with hubby, naturally. Hubby's revenge is three-fold, at least. First, he gets to fuck a hot slut for a while, learning a few new tricks. Second, he gets to reinforce the lesson the wife should have learned already-don't cheat, it has bad consequences. Third, it will probably kill the wife's friendship with the slut.
Of course, it probably wasn't the best approach to saving the marriage, but if it all goes to hell, is he really any worse off?
But anyone that agrees with a nonce like BILLY is worse than DWmoronic, throw your keyboard in a river and seek professional help immediately you imbecile.
@ Saratu how many beastlover were refused by their favorit female dogs last night. This is the main couse they injure others..................
Incomprehensible babble in Albania is incomprehensible babble everywhere else duda, or dubya, or dummy, whatever. It might be okay to rape animals in whatever sad excuse for a country you live in but in the civilized world we don't like it, and we don't like you.
@ I think in the civilized World to injure to offend others ARE A BEST/ANIMAL LIKE ACTIVITY SO I COULD THINK SOMEBODY WHO INJURES OTHER COMMENTERS ARE A.................
I'm confused by the last thing he says. Is he saying he had an affair? Is he talking about women before he met Laurie? Or is he treating "how" literally and giving an answer about the physical act of sex instead of the intangibles of "another woman"?
Transylvanian for "turd burglar"
THE WHORE IS HISTORY!
Just end the fucking marriage. Each can fuck anyone they like. Fucking assholes.
they were able to solve their problem without hours of boring counseling.
Gotta love the irony of the situation. Excellent.
that more of the comments don't relate to the mystery of the HDKesque Beatles song title reference. "Fixing A-Hole" = BRILLIANT! I for one, will never listen to that song quite the same way again, thanks to this story. And Ohio, thanks for this story and ALL of your tales of marital misdeeds and adventures. You will always receive my high praise for being among the most intelligent authors and contributors of this site. Well-intentioned-and-deserved-kudos to you sir! Thanks again!
WTF was the deal with Sweetie's cell phone being left on the dresser? That one seemed to come outa left field and then quickly evaporate. Not nearly as critical as the cell phone in 'Christmas, Counseling etc.'!
dump the whore.
Lots of ass fucking in Literotica stories. Makes you wonder.
Just another excuse for a quick story.
He goes from divorcing her to fucking her best friend for revenge? I thought this was beneath him...oh wait, Sheila was beneath him!
Ohio, you are so much better than this.
Someone commented about all the ass fucking stories in Literotica. Good point. Makes me wonder what's going on? A hell of a lot more ass fucking in Literotica, than in the real world.
at least on his part. If you are that pissed at somebody I don't see the relationship ever getting back to what a marriage should be.
As always from one of the better writers, well written story.
Congrats. Four out of five. I have complained about some of your other stories not being long enough, but clearly this one was designed to be short and sweet. I loved the beginning. The rest was a bit more conventional, but the ending was solid. I look forward to more.
and a lot cheaper than a divorce. I'm sure a lot of the "critics" here will think that you were too lenient, but love should trump stupidity. I know that you have to write what comes into your head so I rarely criticize the content as long as it makes sense and this does. Laurie was stupid and she was punished.
I actually liked this story. He had one dumb ass wife. She needs a new friend unless she doesn't mind sharing her husband with her slutty friend.
Still five stars. Still love it.
Revenge fucks never work. Just divorce and start over.
I would have dumped her ass for two, maybe three reasons:
First she cheats on him, then gives up her ass, that she WOULDN'T give to her husband! (And don't give me that crap that he MADE her - what was he going to do if she refused, rape her?)
Then, she tries to frame him for cheating to excuse her own!
Thank you for all your work
When she confessed, since he already knew that Sheila was and is a bad influence, I'd have made Laurie call sheila and tell her she needed her to come over immediately. (make up an excuse) Then when she arrived, I'd have beat the shit out of her and told her if she tried to press charges, she'd be dead inside of 48 hours! I also would have told her if she ever tried to contact Laurie again, she would suffer that same fate anyway. This revenge fuck shit is for the birds. Sheila here is basically responsible for Laurie's fall, but in the end, according to your story, she gets off Scott free and gets what she wanted all along! No Thanks! She should pay a heavy price!
Nice, short fantasy.
I don't think very many men would stay married to her after the stunt she and her friend tried to pull on him.
Maybe screwing Sheila ( with double condum) , but then still file for divorce . She's already shown her ability to lie and scheme , not very good traits in a wife (or husband ).
Cut your losses and make like a horse turd !
even a new rope still pisses them of. TK U MLJ LV NV
NOT VERY BELIEVABLE!
This was just garbage.......
Stupid enough to be true. The truth is she had an abortion, and doesn't want him to know. Three stupid players, so young they don't realize what marriage is, or what it takes to make it work. I feel sorry for them. This is absurd enough to be real life.
In the shit style of HDK. The shitiness is increased exponentially.
latch on to the new payback routine, TK U MLJ LV NV
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